Ninnondige!
Usiraadide cheluve, naa usiraadide,
Swasadanthe nannaliru, dooravagade,
Onti nadedaru, jothege neralu baruvanthe,
Hattira villadidru, anisuvudu saniha nee iddanthe.
Geechi baredaga ninna bhava-chitravaayithu,
Naachi baredaga ninage prema-patravaayithu,
Savi khushiyalli saviyuva maathugalalu halavu,
Neene nanna jeeva, sada nodabayasuve ninna naguvu.
Nagisalu karana hudukala,
Preethiyinda ondu mutthu needala,
Heege nannali aagthide eno talamala,
Hege tilisali nanna manada hambala.
Nanna eduru koothare nagunagutha neenu,
Holeyuve kanninalli minchinanthe naanu.
Preethige saavilla endu nambuva praani naanu,
Preethisuttha sadaa nannondige iru baa neenu.
3 comments:
Ninna kavanavannu odi katthalalli mulugida nanna ee dinadalli belaju tandide....
dhanyanaade..ninna kavana odi dhanyanaade...
heege sadaa kaala madhuravaada geethegalannu baredu namma manassu trupti padisu...
Inti nimma...
ee vaakyagalannu odi manasalli khushiya hoomale suriyithu.. nimma ashirvaada irabeku endigu nannodane.. sadaa eethara baribahudu iruvenu sadaaa nimmodane..
Gud one!!
It could have been more expressive,
Last two lines can be changed,
" Preethige savilla yendu nambuva athma nannadu,
Ninna preethiyale saavira janma kaledaru saladu "
This might suite better.
Just suggestion
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